You did well with these lyrics, and you did it in your second language! (I wouldn't have guessed) Good job!
In the second stanza, I liked your expression of how the light exposed your sin - that's scriptural, but most songwriters…"
Hi I'm Roy and I'm new to Worship the Rock.I'm a songwriter from Mauritius and would like to hear your comments on my songs.As english is not my first language,this would be very helpful to me.Below is two verse of a new song i've wrote.There's a fire burningIn this heart of mineIt's like an intense yearningTo drink of Love DivineThere's a light that's shiningLaying bare my crimesBut it's Grace so amazingThat paid the ransom price.See More
Hi! Roy! We would to hear the song too..you can post here for all to listen. I've learnt that you are from mauritius....wow..Its a wonderful place ...never been there but 've seen from the movies and picture..Oh I love to be there once in my life time...Im sure more and more pple are following Christ there....Glad to know you...Keep in touch and God Bless...Love, Mez