Dear all,

I would like to hear your feedback on a song I recently wrote: "steadfast is Your love", based on Psalm 118.

link: Steadfast is Your love

(Lyrics below. Note that I am from The Netherlands, so English isn't my mother-tongue. Any comments on the English would be greatly appreciated.)

Thank you all in advance.

Cheers,

Edwin

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Lyrics:

We’re singing; we will praise you strong and loudly

We’re cheering; giving you our thanks and glory

We’re certain; steadfast is Your Love

We’re praying; nothing that we cannot ask for

We’re grateful; when we pray You always answer

We’re certain; steadfast is Your Love

        We stand here, Lord, to offer gratefulness and worship

        We bow our heads, there’s nothing You can’t rise above

        We are your people, it’s our joy to bring You praises

        And to be certain Lord, that steadfast is Your love

We’re building; see the generations growing

We’ll follow; where You lead us, we’ll be going

We’re certain; steadfast is Your Love

We’re fighting; You will guide us to the triumph  

We’ll conquer; nothing that could ever stop us

We’re certain; steadfast is Your Love

        We stand here, Lord, to offer gratefulness and worship

        We bow our heads, there’s nothing You can’t rise above

        We are your people, it’s our joy to bring You praises

        And to be certain Lord, that steadfast is Your love

        We stand here, Lord, to offer gratefulness and worship

        We bow our heads, there’s nothing You can’t rise above

        We are your people, it’s our joy to bring You praises

        And to be certain Lord, that steadfast is Your love

        And to be certain Lord, that steadfast is Your love