"Hi Mike, really like the song, but yes, you could drop a few "unchangings" without losing your message. Maybe just substitute in some other words that mean the same thing, like "everlasting" or "unmoveable", etc (or…"
You have a beautiful song. I am not really that familiar with the genre, so I couldn't really give it a legitimate score :), but it really flows well and has a great message. Something an inspirational singer or choir could sing.…"
"Actually, I appreciate the scoring. Feedback is more important, but the scoring gives me a hint as to how much some like it, and the feedback gives me an idea of thinks I could change for new songs as I write them.
So really, honest scores and…"
I kind've agree with the others.... the melody is good, particularly going into the chorus. But, it is a bit repetitive - some will like this (it makes it easy to pick up), others may not. So, probably somewhere around a 3 or a 4…"
"I actually have it Copyrighted with the US Library of Congress @ http://www.copyright.gov.
Also I registered it @ http://www.ccli.com a Christian performance rights organization. This allows you to receive a little pay if the churches who sing it…"
"Well I hate to put numbers on worship ... but since you asked, I would give the theme and the melody a 4, and the lyrics a 2.5 (lyrics are repetitive and it rhymes a bit much. Though that makes it easy to remember, and thus singable ... it's a…"
"I can see people singing it during an offering or a prayer time, I like the melody and can see people singing it at church....I would give it a 4 also :)
Also, how do you go about getting a song copyrighted?? I saw that you have it copyrighted with…"
I wrote this song while I was at school waiting for students to turn in their tests. It did not match the style of the rest of the album, but included it anyway, because I felt it could identify with people. Are the words inspiring? Melody catchy? More importantly, does it speak to you? Do you sense God's presence when you listen to or sing it? What do you think?5 great song4 good3 ok2 not so good1 bad0 dude! go into something elseThe PDF chart is attached below. I will appreciate your feedback!See More
this is a forum for all to post songs of a "finished" nature or cover tunes for the enjoyment of all. Please post charts if you are able and willing if you think it's something that could be used in worship.
Songwriting, guitars, electric bass, keyboards, vocals
God's purpose for my life is to know him and love him, to love others, to mature in Christ, to find ways to minister to others, and to bring people to Jesus Christ through personal devotion, spending time with my family and church, and involvement in the lives of others. My goals are to live a long and healthy life, to be the best husband and father I can be, bring someone to Christ each week, grow as a Christian, and be productive in my life and music.
Hi Mike, welcome to Worship The Rock. Hope you are blessed by all the great people and resources on this site. Enjoy the discussions, music, blogs and fellowship with people around the world, including me here "down under" :) God bless you, David
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