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Jack Robertshaw
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- South Park, PA
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Christopher Anthony Dresbach replied to Jack Robertshaw's discussion '"A Day with Me" by Jack Robertshaw' in the group Songwriter's Circle - Get Song Feedback"My suggestion on singing this is that you slow down when you sing 'so we knelt.' I have personally made a number of adjustments in my songs to make them flow better. Initially, when having just written a song, I find that it seems…"
Jack Robertshaw replied to Jack Robertshaw's discussion '"A Day with Me" by Jack Robertshaw' in the group Songwriter's Circle - Get Song Feedback"Point 2 is right on. I have been listening when I play the song and thinking, this needs a change but kept ignoring the thought. I have made a change and will repost when I have it down solid. Thanks so much for taking the time to listen. I have…"
Tricia replied to Jack Robertshaw's discussion '"A Day with Me" by Jack Robertshaw' in the group Songwriter's Circle - Get Song Feedback"Hi Jack,
You've got a nice voice and good guitar skills. This song had a sweet feel to it, and the story line is cool.
I have two thoughts to share:
1) the key made the song feel ambiguous. Even New Age. It leaves me thinking, "He was…"
Jack Robertshaw replied to Five Mile Band's discussion 'Check out our song "Our Last Breath"' in the group Songwriter's Circle"I checked out your song. You guys are definitely on to something. Great sound, nice song. Here are a few thoughts. It seemd like it wanted to rock but never really got up and running. I am not sure it had a hook, you know that phrase or riff that…"
Jack Robertshaw replied to Jack Robertshaw's discussion '"A Day with Me" by Jack Robertshaw' in the group Songwriter's Circle"OK, I added the audio file. Although the quality is average."
Jack Robertshaw replied to Jack Robertshaw's discussion '"A Day with Me" by Jack Robertshaw' in the group Songwriter's Circle"Sorry, had the wrong link posted."
Jack Robertshaw replied to Matt Allison's discussion 'Worship You Forever - Feedback please. Thanks.' in the group Songwriter's Circle"I'm thinking there is a Beatles influence in the structure, style and sound although the guitar lick did favor Pink Floyd as Alex stated. Good song, good listen. Maybe try removing the word "you're" from the bridge lines, except…"
Jack Robertshaw replied to Jack Robertshaw's discussion '"A Day with Me" by Jack Robertshaw' in the group Songwriter's Circle"“A Day With Me”
I dreamed a dream in silence, where I met myself again
And with me walked a bearded man who seemed to be a friend
He travelled half a lifetime to spend a day with me
We walked along a sandy beach beside a quiet sea
He…"
Jack Robertshaw added a discussion to the group Songwriter's Circle
"A Day with Me" by Jack Robertshaw
Here is a new song called "A Day With Me". i do not hear much in the way of Christian folk music but I think this would fit the bill. Also I find it a bit easier to upload this with my webcam to Youtube then attach a link than to fiddle with my recording software and change file formats. Please click on the link below and take a listen and let me know if you like the story. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Bp_zs1EPVGY …See More
Chidi Agunwa replied to Jack Robertshaw's discussion 'I Want to Live by Grace' in the group Songwriter's Circle"I was really blessed by these song. I pray for more of God's grace upon your life. Remain blessed!"
Chidi Agunwa replied to Jack Robertshaw's discussion 'I Want to Live by Grace' in the group Songwriter's Circle"I was really blessed by these song. I pray for more of God's grace upon your life. Remain blessed!"
Chidi Agunwa replied to Jack Robertshaw's discussion 'I Want to Live by Grace' in the group Songwriter's Circle"I was really blessed by these song. I pray for more of God's grace upon your life. Remain blessed!"
Gary Gale Norris replied to Jack Robertshaw's discussion 'I Want to Live by Grace' in the group Songwriter's Circle"Great lyrics. I love the song....Not enuf music about Grace to me...Keep writing!"
Jack Robertshaw replied to Andy Tallman's discussion 'Go - Looking for some feedback' in the group Songwriter's Circle"Seems like it has the feel of Chapman's "Arise" or M.W. Smith's "New Halleluiah"."
Profile Information
- Home Church:
- Windover Hills United Methodist
- Musical Gift(s):
- Guitar, Drums, Song writing
- Favourite Music:
- Third Day, Iron and Wine, Dolorean
- Favourite Books / Authors
- The Shack
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- At 4:41am on October 8, 2009,
Eric Stark said… - Thanks for the invite - looks like a neat site.
- At 4:36am on August 24, 2009,
Kathy L said… - thanks for extending friendship! Looking forward to lifting up the name of Jesus together!
- At 1:22am on August 24, 2009, Kathy L said…
- Hi Jack,
Glad to meet you here on WTR! It's a great place to meet and fellowship with wonderful people in the family of God! Thanks for sharing your gifts with us!
- At 2:44am on August 21, 2009,
Rob Perez said… - Listened to both tunes man and I think they are very deep and I was really struck by the honesty and I totally believe you are onto something really special with how you are crafting.
- At 9:25pm on August 20, 2009, Rob Perez said…
- Cool site... thanks for inviting me. I will dig around more here more this Sunday evening. Darrin's two are doing the sleep over this weekend so I will probably have my hands full. :))
I look forward to working with you too!
- At 4:28am on August 18, 2009,
John Buckler said… - I am Christian Music Artist whose desire is to touch hearts and lives through the Music God has given me. Please listen to my heart to heart interview with Mike Becht from Soul2Soul Radio. Find out the Message behind the Music. God Bless, John Buckler
Please feel free to add me as your friend
- At 3:15pm on August 17, 2009,
David Goodwin said… - Hi, welcome to Worship The Rock. Hope you are blessed by all the great people and resources on this site. Enjoy the discussions, music, blogs and fellowship with people around the world, including me here "down under" :) God bless you, David
- At 5:56pm on August 16, 2009,
Donna (Robertshaw) Funk said… - This is wonderful - wish I had this a few years ago but thanks for getting me hooked up now!
- At 5:29pm on August 14, 2009,
Bizzy Bender said… - Welcome to WTR. Check out the songwriting circle if you have any new tunes that you would like some feedback on
Peace
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