Trust You

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Permalink Reply by angela dittmar on May 4, 2011 at 2:57am

Hi Russel

Nice to see you here!

This reminds me of a Barry Manilo tune, something about your voice and the piano. Very Nice!

Well, I don't think it needs it needs a band, you do a nice job!

 

some nits

I think you might try going to the chorus right after the first verse, and not repeat the first verse before the chorus.

You do that later, and that seems better. Or sing the second verse if you want 2 verse before the chorus.

 

 Chorus is good and solid!

 

I think the bridge needs a little bit more of a change, it seems to just stay there and  I hear it ( with such powerful words) to take me somewhere grander. I dont think you need so much music before the bridge, you kind of loose the momentum.... maybe if you just use the second time you sing the bridge - it is more dynamic, go to there... do that kind of bridge immediately after the chorus..... then after the bridge use the music to bring it down again and go back into the verses.

I hope i am explaining myself clearly

 

all in all, a very nice song

of course, just my amatuer opinion, take or leave

 

blessings

ang

Permalink Reply by Russell Henderson on May 4, 2011 at 7:54pm

Thanks for the help, Angela.

Permalink Reply by Dave Dunagan on May 5, 2011 at 6:21pm

Hi Russell,

This is a beautiful song!  I agree with Angela, it doesn't really need a whole band behind it. Perhaps some strings in places.

But I really like the bridge just as it is.

Thank you for sharing!

Dave

Permalink Reply by Russell Henderson on May 6, 2011 at 12:59pm

Dave,

Thanks for the critique

 

Permalink Reply by ALFRED FLORES on June 2, 2011 at 1:02am

Great sounds! Nice piano movements. Flows very well with your voice. I think this sounds like a great prayer song.

The bridge makes this song move like air. Very well written.

 

God Bless

Alfred