Hi Everyone, I know most of the songs submitted here have lyrics, I am working on that, but thought I'd submit for your listening pleasure ( I hope ) and garner your feedback and comment on a song I wrote and recorded last night. It's called "Change Of Seasons"
Peace and Blessings to you all!
hey Jerry, liking what you have recorded... can easily hear (what i think you are doing with) the melody... if i had to throw in my 2 cents, i'd suggest doing more with the production in the sense of pulling back on some instrumentation, then bringing in the house for the chorus (or what i'm hearing as the chorus parts)? i hear both the drums and the rhythm acoustic carrying the rhythm so maybe mix that up on who carries? again, must 2 cents, and we all know that 2 cents is worth these days! blessings are you continue, thanks for sharing!