Here is a song that I wrote to encourage some friends to keep on keeping on after their husban an father had passed away I sang it for them acopela I'm still working on the music for it. I just wondered
what you thought of the lyrics.
Life rolls on like an open range
verse 1
Hearts feel true joy when a new life starts
Hearts are torn by pain when one departs
when our loved one pass our hearts bleed
How we long once more their face to see
Friend if you could see what my heart sees
They wait in Glory land for you and me
Chorus
Life rolls on like an open range
we have days of joy and days of pain
we'll have days of sun and day of rain
we'll all fear the time when nature roars
We'll feel the pain of her strongest storms
we must move on as we did before
Verse2
We travel on through life's open range
sifting true joy from bitter pain
Thanking God for all the sun and rain
trusting God to heal the bitter pain
we travel on through a baron land
Don't lose hope the light marks Glory Land
There it is I'm not normal type of song writer at times you might say. I try to encourage those around
me by trying to paint a word picture. My lyrics from personal exsperience both good and bad. I also try to word my song with the listener in mind so that I can keep intrest long enough to pass on what I
feel God wants me to say to them. I'll look forward to your feed back
I think it's message is good but I think you should realize that you don't have to have a rhyme for every line because in you attempt to do so, it becomes somewhat redundant. There are no laws about songwriting but try not to repeat yourself and try to think a a fresh new way to say what you said before.
peace
Bizzy
Thanks Bizzy
I'll take your message to heart You might say I'm still a bit of a beginer when it come to song writing but you never what you can do until you try. I apreciate your honesty my instructors are saying they would like to see
me try different things with my music . The adventure continues
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